Computers(draft one)
Computers play a more and more important role in modern life. We use them to control the daily work of our electrical appliances like washing machines and TV sets. A teacher can teach students without writing on the blackboard. Therefore, he won't waste a lot of time. Also, he can use it to prepare test sheets. A captain can use the computer to fly a plane by itself. Consequently, the event of air crash can be decreased. A weatherman can use the computer to predict the weather condition more precisely. It has been widely used in many fields.
For me, computer is good. It saves our time and we can used the remaining time doing other things. When there is still no computer, I have to handwrite my assignments and my projects. Computer helps me do my assignments like surfing on the net and exchange ideas with others. Besdies, through the computer, I can get information from all over the world in a moment. It also entertains me like watching movies, playing games and listening to music. Computer makes my life more colorful and makes me happy.

5 Comments:
哇~你寫的好有內容
你第二段開頭怎麼跟老師給的不一樣
阿龍似乎很堅持要一樣呢!
寫的很不錯啊啊啊
8:44 AM
Computer helps me do my assignments like [surfing] on the net and [exchange] ideas with others. 用and連接,要同詞性喔!
寫的不錯說~
7:06 AM
第二段的開頭好像不夠有張力...可以擴充一下句子,像not only...but also...諸如此類的~~
其他寫的不錯唷
8:04 AM
when there is still no computer
我覺得不要still
8:49 AM
我也覺得不要用still
噢,寫得真好
好~棒!喔~
8:29 PM
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