Attitude is everything(draft one)
I never forget the reason my father told me that night. When I was in elementary school, I always got good grades and therefore my father was very proud of me. Through the years, I became arrogant. But that night, I took my report card to my father happily, something happened. He told me seriously. He said, "You are only a small fish in the pond, when you go forward to ocean, you will know how vast the ocean is." This experience affect my whole life.
Attitude, after all, is everything.

5 Comments:
and therefore my father was very proud of me.
→and 就不用了
7:59 PM
我覺得還不錯~~
我覺得跟國中國文課本某課感覺有點像耶~~
8:02 PM
reason
→logic
But that night, I took my report card to my father happily, something happened
→,and something
He told me seriously. He said, "You are
→He told me seriously,"You are
8:29 PM
你應該是英文課唸上癮了吧XD
寫的很好哦!
我不懂的是…結論句和father說的話有什麼直接關係嗎?
8:33 PM
But that night,...
→可以改one night(不是in北京XDDD")
不要打我...XDDD
Nice啦ˇ
:]
8:44 PM
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