Wednesday, March 28, 2007

Computers draft1

Computer plays an important role in our daily life. It not only help students to hand in their homework quickly and also help people transmit information in time. As long as you turn on it,you must fall in love with it. You are sure to remind yourself that never sit in front of computer for a long time. Most parents don't like their children depend on computer.Especially,it waste your time on discussion in bulletin board.

5 Comments:

Blogger 郭包子 said...

Especially,it waste your time on discussion in bulletin board.
It 不能當主詞…因為it不會浪費時間
你怎麼只有一篇?

7:59 PM

 
Blogger 飛奇 said...

You are sure to remind yourself that never sit in front of computer for a long time
computer 的前面要加個the

8:12 PM

 
Blogger [[ 我是_思,,* ]] said...

It not only help...
→help 要加s吧~

少一篇* 楊阿mic你怎麼囉??

太想暖暖噢??XDDDD

8:15 PM

 
Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

ok 滴,

8:32 PM

 
Blogger GIGI said...

it waste your time
→wastes
其他都很不錯

8:52 PM

 

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