Sunday, February 25, 2007

Tips for staying healthy

Needless to say,"Health is above wealth."But how can we keep health?First, We should put much emphasis on balanced diet and eat more high-fiberfoods. Secondly,Proper exercise is helpful to our health.Because it can relivesour stress and tension. Thirdly,a regular life is also important for good health.Finally,doing some recreations in leisure time. It can keeps us in a cheerfulmood.It is a blessing to have good health. So, you had better take good care of your body as soon as possible.

5 Comments:

Blogger 郭包子 said...

Secondly Thirdly,為什麼要加ly啊?
It can keeps us in a cheerfulmood. Keep用原形哦~

7:49 PM

 
Blogger 飛奇 said...

"Secondly,Proper exercise is helpful to our health"
那個proper用小寫喔~~

5:06 AM

 
Blogger 飛飛飛 said...

It can keeps us in a cheerfulmood.這句的keep不用加S !
還有Secondly,Proper exercise is helpful to our health的proper的p要小寫 !

9:29 PM

 
Blogger 平井" said...

1.First後面的we是小寫喔!

2.那個叫什麼阿?!..反正就是那個順序要一致後面都有ly所以就用Firstly

3.Because it can relivesour stress and tension. -->relive our 中間要隔開 can後面是原V

4.Finally的那一句沒有動詞-->Finally, doing some recreations in leisure time can keep us in a cheerful mood.跟下面那一句接起來比較好..cheerful和mood中間加一個空格喔!

9:58 PM

 
Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

high-fiberfoods←降ok嗎?

你好多都沒小寫唷~,後面的 [注意!]

Mic寫的不錯~!!!

11:56 PM

 

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