Saturday, January 13, 2007

My Bedroom(draft one)

My room is very comfortable and clean. As you enter the room,the very big and pretty carpet where we can play chess is in the middle of the room. The French windows where I plant flowers is on the right. The bookcase is on the left wall and the opposite side of French windows. I put some novels on it. In the right coner is my computer. I like to play online game when I have free time. The closet is located in the left corner. There are put all of my clothes in it. My favorite spring bed is behind the carpet,between the closet and computer. The big windows is above the bed. Finally,the desk is to the left of the door. I always write homeworks and study in front of the desk. Although my room is not very big and a little old,I still love it very much.

3 Comments:

Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

我是瀞婷"
In the right coner is my computer.→是"corner"
I like to play online game when I have free time. →可以用take to
→I take to playing online~
The big windows is above the bed.→The big windows 『are』above the bed.
I always write homeworks and study in front of the desk. →homework 不加"s"

3:37 AM

 
Blogger 郭包子 said...

我好不容易找到一個錯誤
就會發現靜婷寫過了= =
so…
老師就叫我們寫
very good!

7:30 PM

 
Blogger GIGI said...

整篇真的寫的很不錯喔
就幾個錯字而已~

9:35 PM

 

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