Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Making Decisions(draft one)

Growing up means making my own decisions. In fact, we make decisions every day, such as choosing socks in the morning and eating dinner at night. As time passing by, the decisions we have own opinion and not to depend on others again. Absolutely, we should be responsible for any decisions we made.


The hardest decision that I ever made was whether I attend the English speech contest. In my junior high school, my teacher encouraged me to attend it. At the time, I firmly believed that I couldn't make it, because I had a great fear of speaking in public. When I was hesitant about it, my friends helped me to build up my confidence. Therefore, I had enough courage to face it. Although, I didn't win the first prize, I have overcame this fear. I am glad to made this decisions. I thought taht the reward is enormous.

3 Comments:

Blogger [[ 我是_思,,* ]] said...

...and eating dinner at night.

→eating what for dinner (at night)
感覺"吃晚餐"不需要做什麼決定,,
改"吃什麼"吧*參考一下_
Dinner,,應該都是晚上吃吧_
所以時間可以省略_^^"

寫的不錯噢!

8:32 PM

 
Blogger 平井" said...

Although, I didn't win the first prize, I [have] overcame this fear.
-->had

I thought [taht] the reward is [enormous].
-->that,用aplenty可能會比較好一點

I am glad to made this [decisions].
decision不用加S

寫的不錯喔!!

8:45 PM

 
Blogger GIGI said...

I am glad to made this decisions. → am→was made→make

I thought taht the reward is enormous.
taht→that(粗心!!)
有些時態不一致耶!

8:51 PM

 

Post a Comment

<< Home